Is this a good way to explain the Goth subculture for a cl project?

quite good. not only do us older goths find beauty in things that others don't appreciate, but we find life in death. We believe we are set free from the shackles of a flesh and bone body once we are delivered from life. We don't just dress up for a fashion show, we live the life and beliefs even whilst wearing jeans and t-shirts, after having kids, or anything else that has to do with life functions. That is a true heartfelt goth.